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* AbortedArc: The possibility of the kingdom's going to war over Jaune's power is mentioned very early in the story, and from the middle point onwards there is a building tension between the kingdoms. Other things such as the [[spoiler: Gillian's rise to power and the death of Blake's parents]] also contribute to this tension. Atlas especially becomes increasingly closed-off and volatile following [[spoiler:Jaune's departure and retreat to Beacon]]. Jaune [[spoiler: faking his death similarly causes a lot of accusations thrown once it appears an Atlas terrorist (really Tyrian) killed him]]. But ultimately a war never breaks out and its never commented on.

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* AbortedArc: The possibility of the kingdom's going to war over Jaune's power is mentioned very early in the story, and from the middle point onwards there is a building tension between the kingdoms. Other kingdoms, which is contributed to by things such as the like [[spoiler: Gillian's rise to power and the death of Blake's parents]] also contribute to this tension.Gira and Kali Belladonna parents]]. Atlas especially becomes increasingly closed-off and volatile following [[spoiler:Jaune's departure and retreat to Beacon]]. Jaune [[spoiler: faking his death similarly causes a lot of accusations thrown once it appears an Atlas terrorist (really Tyrian) killed him]]. But ultimately a war never breaks out and its never commented on.
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* AbortedArc: The possibility of the kingdom's going to war over Jaune's power is mentioned very early in the story, and from the middle point onwards there is a building tension between the kingdoms. Other things such as the [spoiler: Gillian's rise to power and the death of Blake's parents]] also contribute to this tension. Atlas especially becomes increasingly closed-off and volatile following [[spoiler:Jaune's departure and retreat to Beacon]]. Jaune [[spoiler: faking his death similarly causes a lot of accusations thrown once it appears an Atlas terrorist (really Tyrian) killed him]]. But ultimately a war never breaks out and its never commented on.

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* AbortedArc: The possibility of the kingdom's going to war over Jaune's power is mentioned very early in the story, and from the middle point onwards there is a building tension between the kingdoms. Other things such as the [spoiler: [[spoiler: Gillian's rise to power and the death of Blake's parents]] also contribute to this tension. Atlas especially becomes increasingly closed-off and volatile following [[spoiler:Jaune's departure and retreat to Beacon]]. Jaune [[spoiler: faking his death similarly causes a lot of accusations thrown once it appears an Atlas terrorist (really Tyrian) killed him]]. But ultimately a war never breaks out and its never commented on.
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* AbortedArc: The possibility of the kingdom's going to war over Jaune's power is mentioned very early in the story, and from the middle point onwards there is a building tension between the kingdoms. Other things such as the [spoiler: Gillian's rise to power and the death of Blake's parents]] also contribute to this tension. Atlas especially becomes increasingly closed-off and volatile following [[spoiler:Jaune's departure and retreat to Beacon]]. Jaune [[spoiler: faking his death similarly causes a lot of accusations thrown once it appears an Atlas terrorist (really Tyrian) killed him]]. But ultimately a war never breaks out and its never commented on.
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** Because Jaune ends up accepting Ironwood's invitation to live in Atlas, he becomes much closer with him and the members of the Arc-Ops (the canon Ace-Ops) than in canon. In particular, Jaune and Elm end up becoming close friends, whereas in canon the two were simply allies working together.



** When Jaune first meets Pyrrha, she has yet to have become the “Invincible Girl” or grown disillusioned by fame; the next time around she’s closer to that point. In both cases, it’s Jaune who has the more worldly and cynical worldview and chooses to help her learn to form genuine social connections before she can be taken advantage of.

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** When Jaune first meets Pyrrha, she has yet to have become the “Invincible Girl” "Invincible Girl" or grown disillusioned by fame; the next time around she’s closer to that point. In both cases, it’s Jaune who has the more worldly and cynical worldview and chooses to help her learn to form genuine social connections before she can be taken advantage of.



** Jaune and Gillian never met in canon, whereas here she interacts with him when visiting Vale, even helping him to get his Aura under control when it starts overcharging.
** [[spoiler:In canon, Cinder and Jaune are bitter enemies, with the latter hating the former for murdering Pyrrha. Here, however, Cinder forms an unlikely friendship with Jaune, to the point of aiding him in faking his death so he could live a life of peace and anonymity...granted it was because she put the idea in his head with Mercury's help, due to how Salem wants Jaune to revive her daughters, but Cinder was being genuine with her desire to help him escape his current situation (and to her credit, while Jaune admits that she lied to and manipulated him, he is sincerely thankful to her for her aid in giving him a new life and identity for him).]]
*** Similarly, [[spoiler:this changes her relationship with Pyrrha as well. In canon, the two came to blows in Volume 3 when Cinder made her play for the Fall Maiden, resulting in her killing Pyrrha. Here, however, she actually becomes an ally to her (albeit one with her own agenda), pushing her to accept and act on her feelings for Jaune; as a result, the two work together to help Jaune fake his death and disappear, allowing Pyrrha to be with him]].



* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Ghira and Kali Belladonna]] are killed in a house fire orchestrated by [[spoiler:the White Fang]].

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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Ghira and Kali Belladonna]] are killed in a house fire orchestrated by [[spoiler:the White Fang]].Fang (later revealed to have been masterminded by Adam Taurus and the Albain brothers)]].
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* SpiritualAntithesis: To ''Fanfic/{{Null}}'', by the same author. In ''Null'', Jaune is made a fugitive after being kidnapped by Atlas's government when he unlocks a [[PowerNullifier Semblance that is great for killing]]. In ''Raise'', Jaune is hired by Atlas and becomes a super celebrity when he unlocks a power that can raise the dead. Both stories have Nicholas Arc die very early: In ''Null'', this is part of Jaune's StartOfDarkness, in ''Raise'', it is part of Jaune gaining fame (especially because here, it doesn't stick). Both stories start with Jaune's Semblance causing others to ruin his life and ruin his family's lives. In ''Null'', Jaune suffers mostly away from the public eye and spends most of his time away from civilization, here he can't escape people. [[spoiler:In ''Null'', the potential of Jaune's Semblance causes Ozpin to covet it to the point of obsessive madness, whereas in ''Raise'', the potential of Jaune's Semblance induces the same reaction in Remnant's other resident immortal manipulator]].

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* SpiritualAntithesis: To ''Fanfic/{{Null}}'', by the same author. In ''Null'', Jaune is made a fugitive after being kidnapped by Atlas's government when he unlocks a [[PowerNullifier Semblance that is great for killing]]. In ''Raise'', Jaune is hired by Atlas and becomes a super celebrity when he unlocks a power that can raise the dead. Both stories have Nicholas Arc die very early: In ''Null'', this is part of Jaune's StartOfDarkness, in ''Raise'', it is part of Jaune gaining fame (especially because here, it doesn't stick). Both stories start with Jaune's Semblance causing others to ruin his life and ruin his family's lives. In ''Null'', Jaune suffers mostly away from the public eye and spends most of his time away from civilization, here he can't escape people. [[spoiler:In ''Null'', the potential of Jaune's Semblance causes Ozpin to covet it to the point of obsessive madness, whereas in ''Raise'', the potential of Jaune's Semblance induces the same reaction in Remnant's other resident immortal manipulator]]. And their endings differ as well, [[spoiler:even though they both involve Jaune faking his death: in ''Null'', Ironwood helps fake his death in order to protect his sisters, while the two work together alongside Neo to hunt down the remnants of the conspiracy that ruined the Arc family's life, all while knowing he can never live a normal life again. In ''Raise'', it is Salem's faction who helps fake Jaune's death, keeping him on retainer should his Semblance evolve to the point it can resurrect Salem's daughters, all while Jaune is able to live a happy life of anonymity with his lover Pyrrha and their daughter]].
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* AdaptationalVillainy: It's indicated that [[spoiler:Sienna Khan had the Belladonnas assassinated, which is a low her canon counterpart never reached; in canon, the attack on the Belladonnas was prompted by an increasingly radicalized White Fang some time after Adam had already killed her]].

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* AdaptationalVillainy: It's indicated that [[spoiler:Sienna Khan had the Belladonnas assassinated, which is a low her canon counterpart never reached; in canon, the attack on the Belladonnas was prompted by an increasingly radicalized White Fang some time after Adam had already killed her]]. [[spoiler:Except as the final news headline reveals, it was Adam Taurus and the Albain brothers that were responsible, meaning Sienna had nothing to do with that.]]



* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: PlayedWith in Pyrrha's case. Not only does she have feelings for Jaune [[spoiler:and kisses him during one of their talks to show it]], but she genuinely believes that she would be a better fit for him than Weiss would and thus would make him happier, given all the heartache and trouble Weiss keeps causing him. It adds an extra layer of hurt for her to know that the man she likes still wants to repair his relationship with a woman who seems to do nothing but hurt him, but she still soldiers through and genuinely tries to fix their relationship since he still wants it to work. [[spoiler:After Weiss spends a week helping Blake recover from her parents' deaths yet never tries to help Jaune when he loses Elm, Pyrrha finally has enough, and with Cinder's coaching she starts genuinely trying to tempt him away from Weiss]].



* IWantMyBelovedtoBeHappy: PlayedWith in Pyrrha's case. Not only does she have feelings for Jaune [[spoiler:and kisses him during one of their talks to show it]], but she genuinely believes that she would be a better fit for him than Weiss would and thus would make him happier, given all the heartache and trouble Weiss keeps causing him. It adds an extra layer of hurt for her to know that the man she likes still wants to repair his relationship with a woman who seems to do nothing but hurt him, but she still soldiers through and genuinely tries to fix their relationship since he still wants it to work. [[spoiler:After Weiss spends a week helping Blake recover from her parents' deaths yet never tries to help Jaune when he loses Elm, Pyrrha finally has enough, and with Cinder's coaching she starts genuinely trying to tempt him away from Weiss]].



* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Because Ghira and Kali agree that Blake deserves to be punished for her actions and accept a deal with Atlas, [[spoiler:Sienna Khan has them murdered in a house fire]].

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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Because Ghira and Kali agree that Blake deserves to be punished for her actions and accept a deal with Atlas, [[spoiler:Sienna Khan [[spoiler:the White Fang (or as revealed in the final chapter, Adam Taurus and the Albain brothers) has them murdered in a house fire]].
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** [[spoiler:The final news headlines reveal that Adam and the Albain Brothers were personally responsible for the house fire killing the Belladonnas, with Adam being convicted as a result and Sienna swearing to hunt down the Albains as retribution]].
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Complete as of September 7, 2023.

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* DistantFinale: The final chapter has a time skip ten years into the future, showing that [[spoiler:Jaune is living a peaceful, quiet life in a remote Vacuo village under a presumed identity, in a loving romance with Pyrrha (and with a daughter to boot). Across Remnant, the war between Atlas and Menagerie has ground to a halt, with Ironwood and Sienna having worked out a peace treaty, while the political leaders that pushed Atlas into isolationism have been ousted from power. And as revealed in the final news snippets: Lavender Arc married Whitley, with the two having opened up a children's hospice in Jaune's name; Ozpin has stepped down from his position of Headmaster, handing the position off to Glynda; Gillian Asturias has been crowned the new Queen of Vacuo; and Adam Taurus has been publicly implicated as the guilty party in the murder of Ghira and Kali Belladonna (likely aided by the Albain brothers), and forced to go on the run]].


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* EarnYourHappyEnding: By the end of the fic, Jaune has earned his. [[spoiler:with the aid of Cinder's allies, he has successfully faked his death and now lives a normal, mundane life as "Nickel 'John' Sanders" in a far-off village in Vacuo. Ten years have passed, and not only has he not once had to use his Semblance to revive anyone, he is able to make an honest living as a doctor, and he is married to Pyrrha, with the two having a daughter, Helena. Granted he is only able to live this life due to Salem having him on retainer in case his Semblance one day evolves to bring her children back to life, but he considers it a small price to pay since she makes sure no one discovers his true identity]].
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* TheWorldIsNotReady: Jaune directly says this about his semblance in chapter 58, after everything that has fallen apart because of it, he's probably right.
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I’m very tempted to add a Tempting Fate entry as well in regards to Jaune’s belief that kid family would be better off, but perhaps that should come in later.


** By the time he begins [[spoiler: planning to [[FakingTheDead fake his death]]]],[[MaddenIntoMisanthropy Jaune]] knows to look for an angle in any help he’s offered, so he asks up front what his savior wants. He’s told that [[ExactWords a powerful woman wants him to revive her four children]]. Her minion [[BrutalHonesty admits up front]] that he [[ImpossibleTask definitely can’t do so]], since the children have been dead longer than Jaune’s been alive, but his new employer would be motivated to keep him alive and in good health on the chance that his Semblance evolves in the future. Jaune agrees to this because he believes [[TemptingFate his situation can’t get any worse]], and the worst he could picture was an aging crime boss whose connections would be hard-pressed to hurt his loved ones given the level of security they have. In reality, [[spoiler: Jaune was agreeing to hand himself over to the [[HumanoidAbomination Queen of the Grimm]], her “task” involves reviving people after millennia, not decades, and she is entirely capable of sending the Grimm after entire Kingdoms [[IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure just to get at Jaune’s family]].]]

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** By the time he begins [[spoiler: planning to [[FakingTheDead fake his death]]]],[[MaddenIntoMisanthropy death]]]], [[MaddenIntoMisanthropy Jaune]] knows to look for an angle in any help he’s offered, so he asks up front what his savior wants. He’s told that [[ExactWords a powerful woman wants him to revive her four children]]. Her minion [[BrutalHonesty admits up front]] that he [[ImpossibleTask definitely can’t do so]], since the children have been dead longer than Jaune’s been alive, but his new employer would be motivated to keep him alive and in good health on the chance that his Semblance evolves in the future. Jaune agrees to this because he believes [[TemptingFate his situation can’t get any worse]], and the worst he could picture was an aging crime boss whose connections would be hard-pressed to hurt his loved ones given the level of security they have. In reality, [[spoiler: Jaune was agreeing to hand himself over to the [[HumanoidAbomination Queen of the Grimm]], her “task” involves reviving people after millennia, not decades, and she is entirely capable of sending the Grimm after entire Kingdoms [[IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure just to get at Jaune’s family]].]]


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** The choice of what Kingdom Jaune might call his home is eventually revealed to be this, since [[DoomMagnet his mere presence]] would be enough to exacerbate any existing problems in any nation he settled down in. With Atlas already fractured and [[UngratefulBastard ungrateful]] and Menagerie openly hostile, the choices are apparently down to Mistral with its [[TheMafia crime families]], Vacuo with its [[SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil human traffickers]], or Vale and its [[PoliceAreUseless dearth of security]]. [[spoiler: Jaune attempts to TakeAThirdOption by faking his own death and dropping off the radar- and in doing so, trades in an entitled public and insufficient safeguards for the [[HumanoidAbomanation Queen of the Grimm]] and ZERO safeguards beyond CantKillYouStillNeedYou.]]
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I have a few more ideas for Dramatic Irony, but I thought this might be a good place to start.


** By the time he begins [[spoiler: planning to [[FakingTheDead fake his death]]]],[[MaddenIntoMisanthropy Jaune]] knows to look for an angle in any help he’s offered, so he asks up front what his savior wants. He’s told that [[ExactWords a powerful woman wants him to revive her four children]]. Her minion [[BrutalHonesty admits up front]] that he [[ImpossibleTask definitely can’t do so]], since the children have been dead longer than Jaune’s been alive, but his new employer would be motivated to keep him alive and in good health on the chance that his Semblance evolves in the future. Jaune agrees to this because he believes [[TemptingFate his situation can’t get any worse]], and the worst he could picture was an aging crime boss whose connections would be hard-pressed to hurt his loved ones given the level of security they have. In reality, [[spoiler: Jaune was agreeing to hand himself over to the [[HumanoidAbomination Queen of the Grimm]], her “task” involves reviving people after millennia, not decades, and she is entirely capable of sending the Grimm after entire Kingdoms [[IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure just to get at Jaune’s family]].]]



** First humanity’s MortalityPhobia floods Ansel with immigrants desperate for resurrections, nearly destroying the settlement and the Arc family.
** He gets a HopeSpot that lasts a few years as Atlas evacuates his family and compensates him well for his services- but this just solidifies his image as an asset for nations to fight over, it breeds resentment among the Atlas population who [[EntitledBastard think he’s paid too much]], and his workload is still literally killing him.

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** First humanity’s MortalityPhobia floods Ansel with immigrants crazed mobs desperate for resurrections, nearly destroying the settlement and killing the Arc family.
family even as Jaune spends every waking moment at the hospital.
** He gets a HopeSpot that lasts a few years as Atlas evacuates his family family, sets boundaries for his hospital work, and compensates him well for his services- but this just solidifies his image as an asset for nations to fight over, it breeds resentment among the Atlas population who [[EntitledBastard think he’s paid too much]], and his workload is still literally killing him.
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* FromBadToWorse: This basically defines Jaune’s life from the moment he unlocks his Semblance.
** First humanity’s MortalityPhobia floods Ansel with immigrants desperate for resurrections, nearly destroying the settlement and the Arc family.
** He gets a HopeSpot that lasts a few years as Atlas evacuates his family and compensates him well for his services- but this just solidifies his image as an asset for nations to fight over, it breeds resentment among the Atlas population who [[EntitledBastard think he’s paid too much]], and his workload is still literally killing him.
** Even as it becomes clear that [[DoomMagnet chaos follows Jaune wherever he goes]], the kingdoms continue to compete for his Semblance because he is a completely unique resource, and can’t simply be ignored.
** It gets to the point where Jaune [[spoiler: decides to try FakingTheDead with the help of a woman who [[BrutalHonesty admits that she’s using him]] and clearly has criminal connections, believing that his situation [[TemptingFate couldn’t possibly get any worse]]… and thus he [[DramaticIrony unwittingly]] works to put himself in the power of Salem, the [[HumanoidAbomination Queen of the Grimm]], who wants him to stretch a firm four-hour limit to [[ImpossibleTask revive children who have been dead longer than the new human civilization]]. And given that Salem had already made a goal out of [[OmnicidalManiac destroying the world]], she would have no problem with razing kingdoms with armies of Grimm [[IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure to give Jaune some encouragement]].]]
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* BrutalHonesty: Ironwood practically weaponizes this in his conversation with Jaune. As opposed to the Vale delegation, Ironwood gets straight to the point and offers nothing but the truth as long as Jaune gives him the truth back, recognizing that Jaune doesn't care for flowery words as much as he just wants help. He goes on to detail how his mere presence is dooming Ansel to eventual collapse.

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Ironwood practically weaponizes this in his conversation with Jaune. As opposed to the Vale delegation, Ironwood gets straight to the point and offers nothing but the truth as long as Jaune gives him the truth back, recognizing that Jaune doesn't care for flowery words as much as he just wants help. He goes on to detail how his mere presence is dooming Ansel to eventual collapse.collapse.
** Later on, when [[spoiler:Jaune decides to fake his death, he finally tells Cinder that he knows she hasn't been honest with him and that she wants something. In response, Cinder is as honest as she can be given the circumstances - she's working on behalf of a woman who wants her daughters back but those daughters have been dead far too long, she ''will'' get dangerously angry when it doesn't work, he'll have to promise to return if his Semblance evolves enough to make it possible, and she's manipulated both him and Pyrrha for what she believes to be his own good. Jaune is so desperate for some isolation that he couldn't care less and goes along with her plan]].
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* PartingWordsRegret: [[spoiler:As Jaune decides to fake his death, his attempt at averting NeverGotToSayGoodbye with Weiss turns into this as the two argue one last time since Weiss [[SkewedPriorities puts more focus on the Vytal Festival Tournament over an hour with Jaune]], but at the very least, he was able to squeeze in one last "I love you" to soften the blow]].

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