theTamer
Since: Apr, 2013
09/16/2023 00:00:00
Yeah, IMHO it feels like two major problems with the fic are Plot Induced Stupidity and overpower OCs. I remember seeing a comment comparing some of what\'s going down as the time travel application of \"If you give Frodo a Lightsaber, Sauron gets a Death Star\" or something similar
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Good Idea, Bad Execution
New Game Plus starts out great. Izuku travels to the past, tries to make things better, but has to deal with a darker world, new characters, and and the consequences of his actions. But then the problems start.
The fic becomes overly reliant on side stories, introducing characters and important plot developments before plopping them wholesale into the fic. Good luck figuring out when you're supposed to go read the side story and which one the new lore's in.
A new character named Ronri breaks the story in half. She has copies of every Quirk, travels the multiverse at a whim, and cannot be slowed down. Ronri negates several bad things that happens to the heroes in the main story, but is shown to be a sadistic serial killer obsessed with Izuku in the side stories.
Ronri is simply too powerful and has no place in New Game Plus. This should be Izuku trying to make the world a better place and having to accept whatever comes with it. A Yandere God-Mode Sue massacring anyone who threatens Izuku (and sometimes his friends) belongs in a separate Horror Comedy fic. I sadly cannot recommend this fic.